Forty Words to Breathe Life into Your Copy

These words that can help capture attention and emotion when used in hooks (to grab attention), in body content (to hold attention) and in CTAs (to drive action):

Amplify

Authentic

Beyond

Breathtaking

Boost

Discover

Effortless

Elite

Empower

Essential

Exclusive

Exhilarating

Explosive

Fascinating

Fearless

Forbidden

Heartwarming

Hidden

Hilarious

Imagine

Incredible

Insider

Instant

Limited

Miracle

Proven

Remarkable

Revealed

Revolutionary

Secret

Sensational

Shock

Simple

Thrilling

Ultimate

Unbelievable

Unforgettable

Unleash

Urgent

Vital

Remember, the key to effective copywriting is to use these words strategically and in alignment with your target audience and the product or service you're promoting.

Be aware that some of these words might be overused in your niche or industry. If that’s the case, don’t use ‘em or instead of making your copy stand out, they'll make your copy blend in.

 

View from a sidewalk café. Amsterdam. (Part 4)

 People walking with determination. A purpose. Somewhere to be.

I’ve reached my destination. My only purpose to be where I am.

Three generations. Taller as they get younger. The matriarch, whose hair is losing the battle against grey, presents as tired but calm. The other bookend, the younger generation. Her eyes darting back and forth to take in every detail or to find something of interest. In the middle, daughter and mother. Her expression remote, thinking about what she’d be doing if she weren’t walking towards Dam Square.

The seagull eyes the piece of discarded pastry claimed by a furiously pecking pigeon. The pigeon puffs up. The seagull lunges. The pigeon swallows its pride, choosing flight over fight. The seagull swallows its prize.

She’s startled by the sound of the can she inadvertently kicked across the cobblestones. She kicks at it again. This time on purpose. Misses. Shrugs. Moves on.

A large Adidas logo shin tattoo is repeated on the calf. Thick lines circle the leg above and below the logos. The foot that belongs to this leg is securely tied into a Nike shoe.

The teenager carrying the plant in protective hard plastic displays none of the enthusiasm of the plant’s bright violet flowers. He plods forward. Blank stare. Maybe counting his steps has his little sister offers an unrelenting monologue in machine gun Spanish.

The hair on his upper lip is long and has been coiffed into giant curls extending both left and right from his cheeks. It must inhibit eating, drinking, and maneuvering through narrow spaces. Mask mandates must’ve been his worst nightmare.

Two comfortably lethargic huskies stroll by unaccompanied. A few steps behind appears a man holding unattached leashes. Following him another huskie. A pack of sorts.

In all likelihood, the Mickey Mouse rolling a joint T-shirt is not Disney approved.

The illustrated woman stops for a smoke. Her balaclava of tattoos leaves her face the only undecorated skin on her shaved head.

The delicate white parchment skin of the old man’s face topped with jet black hair gives the impression of a vampire using a walker.

Stopping abruptly, he pats his pockets. Chest. Side. Back. Slight panic. Chest. Side. Back. Relaxes when the sunglasses are discovered on his head.

The curly-haired dog seems quite relaxed in the baby carrier strapped to the stocky woman’s chest. The pup is bigger than the typical “carry around K9". The woman turns her round, yellow-lensed sunglasses towards me, smiles, and says, “Hi.” She smiles and says, Hi” to everyone she passes. The dog is uninterested in greeting people and just pants contentedly.

A window washer addresses each 15-foot-high display window with expertise clothed in calm efficiency. One day I’ll write the way he cleans glass.

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View from a sidewalk cafe. Amsterdam

Part 1

View from a sidewalk cafe. Amsterdam
Part 2

View from a sidewalk cafe. Amsterdam
Part 3

Red Cons

 As I drag the razor over my stubble, I think about Tommy Perta.

Tommy's dead. Has been for over 30 years.

But I still think about him.

Tom Perta

In high school, a bunch of us were staying at a friend's house on Cape Cod.

Tommy walked into the bathroom as I was dabbing shaving cream on my face and said, "Mr. Frothingham! Were you never taught to shave properly?"

"Um ..."

"Let me show you."

And he did.

And I still follow his instructions. 

I wish I'd known him better then.

I wish he were around to get to know now. 

I remember him as kind. And funny. And creative. And gentle. And sensitive. A good soul. 

I remember his endearing childlike attitude.

He was a unique individual then and can't imagine him different today. Just older and wiser. I don't think the world could've beaten those qualities into submission.

I'm sure I could learn a lot from him now ... like some of the stuff he taught me then (aside from how to shave properly):

• Red Converse Chuck Taylors are an appropriate footwear choice for any occasion.
  
  
• If it looks like it could stay in place for a few seconds, put it on your head and assume the world accepts it as a hat.
  
  
• Exaggerated fake shock is always a funny way to react to off-color or controversial statements.
  
  
• If there's a banana in reach, hold it to your face like a phone and say, "Hello?"

These might sound buffoonish, but in Tommy's hands they were delightfully natural and honest. Without pretense. Just his way of letting out his inner child ... and coaxing out other inner children to come out and play. 

Not many people could pull that off.

Tommy did.

The Power of Connecting with People in Copywriting

 

Copywriters hold a unique position in the world of marketing and communication. They have the ability to bridge the gap between brands and their target audience, crafting compelling messages that resonate with readers. To truly connect with readers, successful copywriters understand the importance of viewing them as individuals rather than mere consumers. They recognize that behind every click, scroll, or purchase, there is a person with hopes, fears, and emotions. Here are 5 reasons why connecting with people is a critical skill for copywriting success.

Humanizing the Communication Process

By viewing readers as humans, copywriters humanize the entire communication process. They acknowledge that readers are not just statistics or data points but individuals with unique experiences, perspectives, and desires. This perspective allows copywriters to approach their craft with empathy and understanding. They can tap into the emotions, needs, and aspirations of their audience, creating copy that truly resonates with them. When readers feel seen, heard, and understood, they are more likely to engage with the copy, forming a genuine connection with the brand.

Speaking Directly to Reader's Needs

Connecting with people enables copywriters to speak directly to the needs and desires of their audience. By understanding the pain points, challenges, and aspirations of their target market, copywriters can craft messages that address these specific needs. They can highlight the benefits and solutions that their product or service offers, providing value and relevance to the reader. When copywriters connect with people on a deeper level, their words become more than just marketing jargon; they become a guiding light that offers solutions and inspires action.

Fostering Genuine Engagement

Copywriters who connect with people foster genuine engagement with their audience. They go beyond surface-level marketing tactics and delve into the realm of storytelling and emotional connection. They understand that building trust and establishing an authentic relationship with the reader is paramount. By tapping into the reader's emotions, aspirations, and values, copywriters can create copy that sparks genuine interest, captures attention, and encourages meaningful interactions. This connection lays the foundation for building a loyal and engaged community around the brand.

Tailoring the Copy to Individual Preference

 Successful copywriters understand that connecting with people means recognizing and respecting individual preferences. People have different communication styles, preferences, and cultural backgrounds. Copywriters who are skilled at connecting with people can adapt their writing style and tone to accommodate these differences. They understand the importance of cultural sensitivity, inclusivity, and tailoring the copy to suit the specific target audience. By doing so, they create an inclusive environment where readers feel understood, valued, and appreciated.

Establishing Meaningful Connections

At its core, copywriting is about establishing meaningful connections. It's about creating a bond between the brand and the reader that goes beyond transactional relationships. Copywriters who excel at connecting with people can evoke emotions, spark curiosity, and inspire action through their words. They know how to tap into the shared experiences and values that unite us as humans. By creating copy that resonates on a deeper level, they forge lasting connections that extend beyond the initial interaction, fostering brand loyalty and advocacy.

To Sum Up: Connecting with people is an essential skill and trait for successful copywriters. By recognizing the humanity behind every reader, copywriters can craft messages that go beyond transactional marketing and establish genuine connections. When copywriters view readers as individuals with hopes, fears, and emotions, they can create copy that speaks directly to their needs, fosters engagement, and establishes meaningful relationships. Treat prospects like intelligent human beings with feelings, not purses to be emotionally shaken until the cash falls out.

 

Connecting with people is just one of many skills and traits that have been identified as essential for success as a copywriter. Learn about the rest here: 40 Essential Skills & Traits of Successful Copywriters